Cinquain poems link to the latin word quinque (five) as they are 5 lines with 22 syllables in total. The pattern of syllables per line is 2,4,6,8,2. Each poem creates a complete 'thought' on the topic.
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George WC
7/11/2017 01:09:14 pm
Big tree
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Mabelle
14/11/2017 12:07:12 pm
A good poem - I like how the poem flows nicely. You stick to the one topic and don't go off track which is great. Your spelling, grammar and punctuation are all fine. 4+
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Alex Ford
7/11/2017 01:09:24 pm
Dipper
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Annie
14/11/2017 12:05:07 pm
Really good Alex, has all the right syllables. 4
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Sophie
7/11/2017 01:09:59 pm
Leaves are
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Peta
14/11/2017 12:05:35 pm
Nice poem sophie i really liked the different words you used and the topic you picked is great i can't really find any mistakes.
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Andrew
14/11/2017 12:09:17 pm
A well described cinquain and it has 22 syllables.4+
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Brooke
7/11/2017 01:10:16 pm
Photos,
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Jamie Temporal
14/11/2017 12:02:38 pm
Very good Brooke they have 22 syllables.5
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Jamie Temporal
7/11/2017 01:11:19 pm
Piggy
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Brooke
14/11/2017 12:04:54 pm
Nice job. It has the rhythm it needs and the syllables are where they should be. I liked it but I wasn't sure about the ending. Overall I give you a 3.
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Hannah
7/11/2017 01:11:38 pm
Bright reef
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Emma Begg
14/11/2017 12:05:50 pm
Good job Hannah, well worded, punctuated and spelling amazing of course. I checked your syllables and there was not a problem I actually think it is a 5.
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Molly
7/11/2017 01:11:56 pm
Lion
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William
14/11/2017 12:08:17 pm
It has good punctuation. I like the use of words you used and how you described them like African Plains and golden grass.
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Kaia
7/11/2017 01:11:57 pm
Zebra
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George W
14/11/2017 12:04:02 pm
I like how the poem fits in nicely. All looks good with the syllables and punctuation. 4+ Good effort
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William
7/11/2017 01:12:04 pm
Calm wind
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Colt Hill
7/11/2017 01:12:04 pm
Ancient
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Harriet
14/11/2017 12:05:41 pm
Your poem is good, I like the words you have used like ancient. You have used the right amount of syllables in each line. Well done. 3/5
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Mabelle
7/11/2017 01:12:10 pm
My board
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George WC
14/11/2017 12:04:19 pm
Very good use of words to match the syllable pattern and is one complete thought.
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Emma
7/11/2017 01:12:17 pm
Co-co
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Hannah
14/11/2017 12:04:10 pm
I like the warm feeling your poem gives the reader. You used the correct number of syllables. I think you could use more advanced punctuation and vocabulary. 4-
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Harriet
7/11/2017 01:12:25 pm
Marley
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Colt
14/11/2017 12:04:19 pm
It has 22 things and it goes 24682 so that is good but I don't get the complete thought because it is like they are racing and then the are washing and then clean i didn't get that. 4-
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Piper
7/11/2017 01:12:30 pm
Sweet calf
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Thornton
14/11/2017 12:05:08 pm
I like your poem because it describes an animal. I'm not sure about line two though, some people could read it wrong. 4
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Annie
7/11/2017 01:12:38 pm
My dog
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Alex ford
14/11/2017 12:04:38 pm
It was nice nice and smooth and your dog sounds cute 4+
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George W
7/11/2017 01:13:18 pm
A leaf
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Kaia
14/11/2017 12:05:29 pm
I really like the way your poem sounds. But on the fourth line it has ten syllables instead of eight. I am going to give you a 3+.
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Peta
7/11/2017 01:13:30 pm
Panda
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Sophie
14/11/2017 12:05:35 pm
I really like your cinquain as i think that it sums up the panda. You have missed a full stop at the end of your poem. Otherwise a really cool poem. 4.
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Andrew
14/11/2017 12:07:24 pm
I like how you described the panda, But you need a full stop at the end. I give you a 4.
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Thornton
7/11/2017 01:13:42 pm
Rabbit
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Piper
14/11/2017 12:06:48 pm
This is good it makes sense and has the correct amount off syllables.
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Piper
14/11/2017 12:08:11 pm
Grade 4
Isla
7/11/2017 01:14:08 pm
Macy
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Reuben
14/11/2017 12:18:10 pm
The lines have all the right syllables. But maybe baaing needed an apostrophe.
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Andrew
7/11/2017 01:16:49 pm
A snake
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Sophie
14/11/2017 12:08:05 pm
I really like the way that you have described the snake. Your description helped me visualize the snake. You have got a capital letter starting your last sentence. 4+
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Reuben
7/11/2017 01:16:58 pm
White snow,
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Isla
14/11/2017 12:06:54 pm
I like how you the words you have used and your punctuation and spelling is good but line four has nine syllables instead of eight. I'm going to give you a 4-.
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Brad
7/11/2017 01:21:57 pm
My cat
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Mabelle
14/11/2017 12:11:31 pm
You overuse the word 'she' - try not to have every sentence beginning with the same word. The third line doesn't really make any sense and doesn't fit with the rest of the poem. You spelling is good but you could expand your vocabulary. 3-.
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