Clerihew are poems consisting of 4 lines which have 2 rhyming couplets. They are about a well-known celebrity that the poet gently pokes fun at!
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Kaia
2/11/2017 12:14:31 pm
Richie McCaw
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Emma Begg
14/11/2017 12:01:42 pm
I really like your clerihew its easy to relate to and its not offensive in fact its quite the oppisite, maybe the last line is a bit long but either than that its amazing. Your punctuation and spelling was fine good job. 4
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George WC
2/11/2017 12:14:38 pm
Donald Trump
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Hannah
14/11/2017 12:00:36 pm
Your poem is humorous and rhymes well. I think you could improve on the rhythm of it. Well done. 3+
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Piper Hood
2/11/2017 12:15:24 pm
Sam Cane
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Reuben
14/11/2017 12:13:40 pm
I like it because it pokes fun at Sam Cane well.
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William
2/11/2017 12:15:31 pm
Justin Bieber
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Harriet Simpson
14/11/2017 12:01:20 pm
You have used good words for your poem. I think you have gently poked fun at him. Your punctuation is good.
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Brooke
2/11/2017 12:15:59 pm
Jacinda Adern,
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Andrew
14/11/2017 12:01:28 pm
A well written clerihew Brooke good punctuation and I liked how you poked fun at her teeth.
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Andrew
14/11/2017 12:02:32 pm
Sorry I forgot to give you a grade a 4
George W
2/11/2017 12:16:12 pm
21 Savage
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Annie
14/11/2017 12:00:41 pm
The last to lines don't really make sense, maybe change turned to turns. But really good. 4
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Emma Begg
2/11/2017 12:16:20 pm
Katy Perry,
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Kaia
14/11/2017 12:00:21 pm
I really like your poem. It makes sense and it has everything it is meant to have. I am going to give you a 4++.
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Isla
2/11/2017 12:16:20 pm
Donald Trump
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Alex Ford
14/11/2017 12:01:07 pm
I liked the rhyming words like wall and downfall and its nice and rhymes well 4+
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Hannah
2/11/2017 12:16:26 pm
Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart
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George WC
14/11/2017 12:00:30 pm
Really good use of vocabulary and good punctuation and spelling.
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Alex Ford 8WH
2/11/2017 12:16:37 pm
Mesha.
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Isla
14/11/2017 12:02:58 pm
I think it is good how it isn't too mean your punctuation and spelling is good but I didn't quite understand line three. I'm going to give you a 4.
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Molly Rudge
2/11/2017 12:16:46 pm
Justin Bieber
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Jamie Temporal
14/11/2017 12:00:15 pm
The last two don't rhyme. but good job. 4
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Reuben
2/11/2017 12:16:59 pm
Sir Richie McCaw
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Piper
14/11/2017 11:58:55 am
This is good it makes sense and your grammar is good.
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Sophie
2/11/2017 12:17:09 pm
Cassandra Clare
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Thornton
14/11/2017 11:59:58 am
You have followed the rules nicely and it rhymes. Are faeries fairies? Over all well done! 5
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Harriet
2/11/2017 12:17:21 pm
Katy Perry
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William
14/11/2017 12:02:58 pm
Your rhyming is good and you have good punctuation. It poked fun at her good.
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Colt Hill
2/11/2017 12:17:27 pm
Donald Trump,
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Peta
14/11/2017 12:00:36 pm
Nice rhyming words Colt very funny
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Annie
2/11/2017 12:18:02 pm
Jensen Ackles
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George W
14/11/2017 11:59:34 am
Good poem Annie nice choice of words 4
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Thornton
2/11/2017 12:18:24 pm
Quade Cooper
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Sophie
14/11/2017 12:01:43 pm
I like the way that you gently poke fun at Quade Cooper and the way that you have a piece of the Maori language in your clerihew. 5
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Jamie Temporal
2/11/2017 12:18:41 pm
Donald Trump
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Peta
2/11/2017 12:19:00 pm
Mark Duffer
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Colt
14/11/2017 11:59:34 am
Duffer and bother don't quite rime
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Bradley Foster
2/11/2017 12:19:06 pm
Donald Trump
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Mabelle
14/11/2017 12:02:15 pm
This poem doesn't make complete sense. 'Speaks' and 'weak' don't really rhyme and in the final line it should be 'he' not 'he's'. The last two lines don't really make any sense together. 3-.
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Mabelle
2/11/2017 12:20:07 pm
Usain Bolt
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Andrew Ermio
2/11/2017 12:20:24 pm
Michael Jordan
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Brooke
14/11/2017 12:01:01 pm
Well Done. I like how it made me smile and I like what words you chose and they make sense together. The celebrity is indeed famous and you do gently poke fun at him. Your punctuation was on point, your spelling too. Overall I enjoyed it and I give you a 4.
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