The Irish Limerick was believed to have originated when returning soldiers brought them back to their hometown of Limerick. Each poem consists of 5 lines and lines 1,2,5 rhyme and lines 3,4 rhyme.
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Sophie
27/10/2017 12:10:57 pm
A boy who loved to bake
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Sophie's correct version
8/11/2017 08:13:33 am
A boy who loved to bake
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Jamie Temporal
13/11/2017 10:44:12 am
Very Good Sophie. 4++
Kaia Frazerhurst
27/10/2017 12:11:09 pm
There once was a girl from France
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Sophie
14/11/2017 12:18:57 pm
I really like the way that have made the limerick tell a story. You have made all of the words rhyme, meaning that your limerick has the correct rhythm of a limerick. 5
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Colt Hill
27/10/2017 12:11:27 pm
There once was a girl from Perth
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Hannah
13/11/2017 10:44:04 am
Your poem is amusing and rhymes well. I like your use of punctuation. I was a little confused as to how she kept a rocket in her pocket. 4-
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Mabelle
27/10/2017 12:11:36 pm
A man who loved to dig
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Reuben
13/11/2017 10:46:38 am
I like that all the couplets rhyme well together and I can't find any errors but you could've used a different word in the first and second line instead of loved.
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Emma
27/10/2017 12:11:47 pm
There once was a boy named Larry
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Andrew
13/11/2017 10:43:55 am
I liked how you really rhymed it and it flowed. Well done
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George W
27/10/2017 12:11:47 pm
A cat who hated pugs
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Molly
13/11/2017 10:45:07 am
Your poem is good George. I really like the theme of your poem. 4.
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Harriet
13/11/2017 10:46:52 am
Your poem is good. Good use of words. 3
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William Wightman
27/10/2017 12:11:58 pm
There once was a boy named Sean
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Annie
13/11/2017 10:45:31 am
Really good, cant see any mistakes. 4+
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Molly
27/10/2017 12:12:07 pm
I have a dog called Rocket
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Molly
13/11/2017 10:39:52 am
Until one day he farted
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George W
13/11/2017 10:43:08 am
Good choice of words Molly.
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George W
13/11/2017 10:45:14 am
4
Harriet
13/11/2017 10:45:21 am
You have chosen good words for poem. 4
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Alex Ford
27/10/2017 12:12:20 pm
Once there was a kid named Kase,
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Piper
13/11/2017 10:46:28 am
This is good but maybe work on using your commas
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Brooke
27/10/2017 12:12:30 pm
There once was...
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George WC
14/11/2017 12:11:39 pm
Very nice flow and use of vocabulary and a title. 4+
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Andrew Ermio
27/10/2017 12:12:37 pm
There once was a boy named Sean.
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Emma
13/11/2017 10:44:20 am
It is a very good limerick, maybe next time think uniquely because a few other people had very similar limericks with Sean and lawn. 4- good job.
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George WC
27/10/2017 12:12:37 pm
There once was a girl from Cork
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Peta
13/11/2017 10:44:59 am
Great rhyming words george
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Thornton
27/10/2017 12:12:42 pm
There once was a boy named Tom
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Isla
14/11/2017 11:58:31 am
I like how there is a bit of humor in it and your punctuation and spelling is spot on. I'm going to give you a 5.
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Harriet
27/10/2017 12:12:43 pm
My best friend Molly
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Molly
13/11/2017 10:43:16 am
I like your poem Harriet. Your punctuation is good. 4
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Alex Ford
13/11/2017 10:45:14 am
I liked how you added in your friend i give it a 4+
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Hannah
27/10/2017 12:12:50 pm
A boy who was terribly friendless
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Colt
13/11/2017 10:42:35 am
I like the words you used and it also makes sense for a poem. 5
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Peta Muir
27/10/2017 12:13:05 pm
There was once a girl named Mary
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Alex Ford
13/11/2017 10:43:31 am
I Liked the words you use like gallop i give it a 4+
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George WC
13/11/2017 10:43:56 am
Very good story and rhymes although the second line was a little bit long. All over it made sense and flowed
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Reuben
27/10/2017 12:13:11 pm
There once was a girl from Greece
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Mabelle
13/11/2017 10:47:08 am
A good poem, everything that should rhyme does. Your spelling and punctuation are fine. 4.
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Isla
27/10/2017 12:14:36 pm
There once was a girl from Japan,
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Thornton
13/11/2017 10:45:52 am
I liked how there was a capital for all the starts and the country Japan. It all rhymes well and makes sense. Well done
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Thornton
13/11/2017 10:47:19 am
4 well done.
Te
27/10/2017 12:14:45 pm
There once was a girl from New York.
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Brooke
13/11/2017 10:44:54 am
Well done. It is quite a cool poem. Some parts don't make complete sense, 'the cat was very disgust' . I'm don't think that fuss and dusk rhyme as well as other words may have done. Overall I give you a 3.
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Jamie Temporal
27/10/2017 12:15:17 pm
This boy loves mugs
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Sophie
13/11/2017 10:47:39 am
I like the direction you were heading in with this piece of poetry.
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Annie
27/10/2017 12:16:04 pm
There once was a boy from Alabama.
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William
13/11/2017 10:44:47 am
Good choice of words. I don't get "but someone but him in a cage"
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