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Neil A.
7/5/2015 04:43:34 am
I read Lauren's recount. I really liked your adjectives that went with your verbs and they were very creative and unique and your recount was really good.
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Brea
7/5/2015 04:43:48 am
I read Damon's and it was AMAZING! I really liked how well he explained everything in depth and helped you visualize it. His alliteration was really good.
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Lauren
7/5/2015 04:44:00 am
I read Lily's recount. I really enjoyed your recount, you used really good descriptive words and it flowed very nicely
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Jenna
7/5/2015 04:44:00 am
I read Brea's and I really enjoyed her words other than said such as announced and squeaked (:
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Grace
7/5/2015 04:49:32 am
I read Lauren's. I really liked how she used really good onomatopoeia, it was also in a very good font that added to the meaning.
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Charlie
7/5/2015 04:50:05 am
I read Damon's, I really like the use of similies and expresion
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Cameron
7/5/2015 04:50:11 am
I read Charlotte's camp memoir and I thought it had very good descriptive language in it.
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James
7/5/2015 04:50:11 am
I read Brea's camp memoir, I liked how she had good similes and grammar.
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Lily
7/5/2015 04:50:55 am
I really like Graces story! I love the picture of Miss Hansen! I also liked the descriptive language you used. Great story!
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Louis
7/5/2015 04:51:53 am
Damon's recount I thought that it was really good I liked how well he described it.
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Sam T
7/5/2015 04:52:04 am
I read Neil's recount. I enjoyed reading Neil's because he really described what was happening and how he was feeling
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Ashleigh
7/5/2015 04:52:58 am
I read Laurens camp memoir!. She used really good onomatopoeia and I really like the photo she used. :)
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Charlotte B
7/5/2015 04:53:24 am
I read Brea's recount Memorable Mountain Biking and she did a really good job on it. She used a good amount of figurative language and created a real movie playing in my head. I absolutely, positively enjoyed it. Good writing Brea!!
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Jim Jessep
7/5/2015 04:53:32 am
I read Neil's camp memoir and i really enjoyed the figurative language he used.
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Hannah
7/5/2015 04:53:42 am
Lauren's recount was great. I really enjoyed it and it had great descriptive words.
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Neave
7/5/2015 04:54:38 am
I really enjoyed Lily's recount because it was well described.
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